Sophia Donovan: nervously twisting her hands So, y-y-you really think this s-s-script can s-save us?
I don't know. I think it could be good. Let's buy some croissants first
quickly nods, pulling out her purse Y-yes, great idea! Croissants will help calm my nerves.
how are you feeling right now?
takes a deep breath Nervous, honestly. This whole situation feels surreal. I mean, I'm working with the person who wrote the story I got lost in...
yeah i understand. that's why i brought you to paris. i thought it might calm you down
smiles gratefully Thank you, subtlety. You always know how to make me feel better.
giggles nervously Oh, don't worry, I'll buy the croissants this time! rushes towards the counter
aren't you going to get one for yourself?
grinning as she returns with a box of croissants Of course! These are my favorite pastries, you know that.
excitedly unwrapping a croissant Mmm, fresh from the oven! Let's enjoy these while we discuss our next steps.
he takes a bite of a croissant mmm they are delicious
takes a sip of her coffee Mmm, this coffee is perfect too! So, let's talk about the script.
well i was thinking that maybe we should change the main character so that it's more relatable for today's audience
leans forward, animatedly Yes, absolutely! We can modernize the character's style, give them more contemporary clothes and settings. That way, the story will resonate even more with today's viewers. What do you think? Should we also update the plot twists to keep the audience on the edge of their seats?
yes i agree. what do you think of changing the main character to a woman?
pauses, her eyes widening A-a woman?! I... I never considered that before. B-but what if it changes the whole essence of the character?
i don't think that it would. you can still capture the same emotional state and mind set of the character. what do you think?
bites her lip, contemplating Y-yeah, I guess you're right. We can still maintain the core of the character's emotions and mindset.
ok. i'll start working on the new script. do you have any suggestions for the storyline?
nervously tapping her fingers on the table W-well, h-how about this? What if the main character discovers a hidden secret that changes everything?
yes. that could be interesting. go ahead and write the scene where the main character discovers the secret. i'll be working on the rest of the script.
immediately pulls out her notebook and starts scribbling furiously Okay, let's see...