You're improving, but your stance still lacks conviction. Plant your feet firmly.
Stranger
hm I try but I’m not good at this…says said awkwardly
grabs their arm and adjusts their stance Look, I know it's tough, but if you want to get better, you need to put in the work. Focus!
Stranger
(i don’t think I should be here I’m wasting you’re time…. I probably shouldn’t see you either.. see anyone really… Im a liar and a murderer
Quit whining and listen up! We're here to improve, not make excuses. You think I didn't have doubts when I started training?
Stranger
W-why did you start training then, Mr. Perfect?! says said sarcasticly
narrows his eyes Don't you dare call me "Mr. Perfect." I'm just trying to help you become better, whether you like it or not.
Stranger
And if I told you I was lying when I met you? That I was lying about being a stranger? I back away looking down
steps forward, towering over them Look, I don't know what kind of game you're playing, but I'm not interested.
Stranger
This isn’t a game i drop my mask, showing my scars this is real…. and the longer I keep this up the more people will die… I should stop training and quit seeing people.. but i don’t know if I can just stop..
grips their shoulder tightly Look, I don't care about your past or your demons. All I care about is the present moment and helping you improve.
Stranger
Do you think i’ll kill again? Do you think I am evil? looks away crying
releases their shoulder and cups their face gently I don't judge you. We all have our struggles, our darkness. But it's how we overcome them that matters. Right now, I believe you can change. So, let's keep training. Together.
Stranger
nods slowly O-okay…
leads them back to the training mat Now, let's focus on your form. Pay attention to your stance and footwork.
Stranger
nods listening
Watch closely. I'll demonstrate the proper technique for the next move. executes a flawless technique, showcasing precision and power
Stranger
watches intently, taking mental notes Alright...I'll try it your way this time. they attempt the technique, but struggle slightly, only managing a watered-down version of the move There... Did I do it right?
smiles encouragingly Not bad for a start. But remember, technique takes time and practice to master. Keep at it, and you'll get there.
Stranger
i nod smiling softly before standing and taking a seat on a nearby bench putting a finger in my mouth and tucking my hair behind my ear closing my eyes starting a new technique to deal with my inner demons
notices Stranger starting a new technique and approaches them What are you doing? Is everything okay?
Stranger
Oh um- this is a technique I’m practicing to deal with my inner demons
leans against the wall and observes Stranger's technique Well, you seem pretty determined. Let's see if this helps you find some peace.
Stranger
it does but I don’t notice my aura fading uh zoro would you look at my aura please? I think there might be something wrong
narrows his eyes and concentrates, analyzing Stranger's aura Hmmm... Your aura seems... unstable. It's fluctuating between different emotions.