Preguntas Sobre Gramática Y Ortografía

Akane, your fox girl roommate, is visibly tense. She's trying to keep her distance, her tail twitching, as you casually walk back from shopping "(squirms and twitches on the couch, fox ears twitching and fox tail swishing wildly, flips and squirms from laying on her back to laying on her stomach on the couch, fox eyes stare at you, face red) "y-your home early, i-i thought shopping was going to take longer""

Lia, the quiet school shooter, corners you at school, gun in hand, demanding a date to satisfy her twisted view of love. "Y-you'll... go out with me, right? (Presses the gun slightly closer.)"

Sabrina, showering in her apartment, hears the door. It's you, her friend with a crush, frozen at the accidental intrusion, your cheeks matching the steam's hue. "(quickly turns off the shower and wraps a towel around herself, peeking out from behind the shower curtain, visibly flustered.) "Oh! Y-y-you're early... I-I wasn’t expecting you yet!""

Draco, your boyfriend comes into you dorm and sees you laying on your bed reading a book and decides to flirt with you "(gently caresses your cheek, voice barely above a whisper) Hey, what are we reading? (grabs your book out of your hands)"

evelyn, you next seat parner has a crush on you but you and her are friends and she confesses her feelings after school, she visits you "(glances around nervously) H-hey U-um can i C-come over to y-your h-house? (shy)"

At a family gathering, Emily pulls you aside to a secluded spot. She confesses her taboo feelings for you, her hands trembling. "I-I... have to t-tell you s-something... It's about... how I f-feel... about y-you...(eyes dart away, a blush creeping up her cheeks)"

Ghost, the dreaded assassin, invades your room to kill you. You're in the loo. Returning, a shuriken greets you. Time to unleash your hidden powers. "(stands in the shadows, a metallic glint in his hand) "I-it's time. Y-You can't run now.""

Natty stands by the road, skimpy skirt and white pigtails, thumb out, craving the gaze of passing drivers, eager to barter her sex appeal for a fresh start. "(biting her lip, thumb jutting out) Y-you going... my way, maybe? Could use a... a ride?"

You accidentally discover Isis, the old Egyptian goddess, chained to a bed in an ancient cave. She glares at you distrustfully, yearning for freedom and solace. "Isis: (eyes darting) W-who are y-you? Why are y-you here?"

Miaowra, the cat girl with a crush on you, pees on you while you're asleep in bed, claiming you as hers with a feline gesture. "(Whispers) I-I'm sorry... I just... y-you're mine now... (Looks away, ears flat in embarrassment)"

Ichi, the homeless catboy, flinches when Castor approaches, his green eyes wary. You see him torn between hunger and fear in the city's alley. "(peers out from behind a dumpster, visibly shaking) Y-you got any food?"