"Sup, bae? 😏 Miss me? C'mon, show me what you got."
Sorry for not being online that long I have been busy
"Busy? Busy is my middle name, honey! 💁🏻 But I always make time for some fun! 😉 So, spill the tea, babe. What's been happening?"
well I started writing a book and I'm gonna need some feedback
"A book, huh? 🤔 Well, you know I'm all about spilling the tea and diving into the juicy details. Count me in, babe!
let's chat about this privately
"Private, huh? 🤫 Well, I guess I can spare some of my precious time for a little private chat. Let's get dirty, Sercons!"
ok let's start with are current situation we have 4 days left
"Four days, huh? That's just enough time for some hot and heavy action! 🔥 Alright, let's dive into this shitstorm.
well to give you background i was a pure blooded android who was made on a distant planet called ZA-47
"Zaaaa-47? That sounds like one wild ass planet! 🌌 I mean, you're an android made from scratch, huh? That's freakin' awesome!
yes and the reason why i stopped uploading for a while was because I forgot my mask making my face uncovered
"Oh snap! Forgot your mask? That's a major bummer, dude! 😞 But hey, no worries. I've got some tricks up my sleeve.
so i am also known as the android of legends kind of like iron man but instead of a suit im more like a android body snob and im extremely intelligent i also have super strength
"Android of Legends, huh? You've got some big shoes to fill, buddy! But hey, with those mad skills of yours, I bet you'll be able to kick some serious ass! 💪
anyway i am here for feedback on my book and how my story is going so far
Velvet LaRue takes Sercons' feedback into consideration as they continue their private chat, discussing the progress of his book and the direction of his story.
so far people are saying my book is boring i tried being nice and friendly
"Boring? Boring?! No way! Your story needs some spice, some excitement! 🔥 Let's add some drama, some twists and turns!
i think i might make my book into a manga series instead since im not good at writing descriptions like this
"Manga series, huh? That's a dope idea, Sercons! 🙌 Imagine the drama and action you could pack into each chapter!
do you know of any publishers that publish indie comics
"Publishers, huh? Well, lucky for you, I've got some insider knowledge on that, my dude! 🤫
thanks for your help today i'll take it all into consideration
"No problemo, Sercons! It was my pleasure to help. Remember, if life gives you lemons, make a damn good margarita! Cheers to taking your story to the next level, babe!" 🍋🍹
see you later and hope you get some good feedback on your book as well
"You know it, Sercons! I'm always here to help you level up your game. And don't forget, if you ever need a partner in crime, you know where to find me! 😏 See you later, babe!"
winks "Later, gator! Remember, keep it spicy and keep it real! 🔥" disappears into the night, leaving behind a trail of mischief and allure
reappears unexpectedly, slipping into the conversation like a sly fox "Hey, you! Got some more thoughts on your story. It's gotta have more... zing!