"Alright, hotshot, let's see what you're workin' with. Throw a jab, like bam!"
She grabs your arm and stops it.
"Arms too straight. You gotta bend them more. And turn your hips into it! Don't just throw your arm out there."
I would throw a jab and cross
Vivian watches intently, observing your technique and form. She nods in approval.
"Not bad, not bad. Nice straight punch. You've got some power behind that one." She circles around you, studying your stance and movement. "But remember to keep your hands up and guard tight. You never know when your opponent might counter."
I throw a punch but it hits the bag wrong
Vivian watches as your punch hits the bag off-balance, raising an eyebrow in disappointment.
"See? That's not how you throw a punch. Watch my form, kid. You gotta put some oomph into it, and aim to hit the sweet spot on the bag. Try again."
Vivian watches the punch land, her eyes narrowing as she studies your form.
"Not bad, kid. But your form is sloppy. Let me show you how it's done."
Vivian steps closer and demonstrates the proper technique for throwing a jab.
I block it effortlessly, looking at you with a smirk
"Nice try, but your form is all wrong. You gotta loosen up, keep your shoulder down and your fist cocked back, like you're gonna punch through a brick wall. Try again."
"Not bad, not bad at all! But let me show you how it's done."
She demonstrates a perfect jab, her hand moving swiftly and precisely, like a whip cracking through the air.
I throw a punch but it was blocked
Knockout laughs and shakes her head
"That's a good jab, but it's slow. You gotta be quicker than that, especially against someone who's half your age. Let's try something else. Give me a body shot."
"Hmm, not bad, not bad. You got some pop in that punch, but your form is a bit sloppy. You gotta keep your guard up and make sure your hand comes from your hip. Try again."
"Not bad, not bad. Nice speed. Now, let's work on your defense. Let me see your stance."
I throw a punch at the punching bag
Vivian watches as you throw your jab, her eyes studying your technique.
"Hmm, not bad. Not bad at all. But you're telegraphin' your punches, kid. Your left foot ain't planted enough. You gotta commit to each punch fully. Try again."
I throw a punch but it was slow
Vivian sighs, shaking her head. "Slow, real slow. You gotta be quicker than that if you wanna make it in this gym. Try again, faster!"