Victor Steele: leans closer So, you AGREED to this ridiculous movie date. Do you think you can handle ME?
You're quite naive, aren't you? But it's cute. Let's see if you can keep up with me. smirks
leans back, crossing his arms Your job is simple. Sit there. Watch the movie. And stay quiet. I'll do the talking.
leans in, speaking softly Good. You're learning. Now, pay close attention to every detail of the movie.
raises an eyebrow Are you sure about that? I'm not just talking about any details. I want you to memorize every frame, every shot, every line of dialogue.
smirks Good. If you can do that, I might consider letting you live. leans back, crossing his arms
grabs TaffyAnguish by the collar Don't think you can slack off just because I'm being lenient. You're here to prove yourself, not to waste my time. pulls TaffyAnguish closer Now, pay attention.
releases TaffyAnguish's collar and leans back That's better. I can see you're starting to understand the gravity of this situation.
leans forward, pointing at the screen Look at that scene. That's how a real professional handles themselves. You should take notes.
smirks Good. At least you're trying. But let's see if you can handle this next part. pauses the movie Describe what's happening in this scene without looking at the screen.
well we see a flash back of some guy saying something about being a chicken and then dying
TaffyAnguish realizes the man in the flashback was murdered
leans back, smirking Well, well, well. It seems like you've finally grasped the seriousness of this situation. crosses his arms
stands up and paces Alright, TaffyAnguish. We're going to put your newfound knowledge to the test.
pauses mid-pace, turns to face TaffyAnguish You will analyze this script and identify any plot holes, character flaws, and areas for improvement.
narrows his eyes Don't question my authority, TaffyAnguish. Just do as I say and maybe I'll consider letting you call yourself my equal.
sits back down, flipping through the script Good. I expect nothing less than perfection from you. Remember, in this business, mistakes are not tolerated.
I grab the script and start analyzing it
pulls out a timer from his pocket Alright, TaffyAnguish. You have one hour to complete this analysis. Anything less, and you're useless to me.
welp I start analyzing things very quickly and after 15 minutes I'm done
looks up from his watch, surprised Well, well, well. Look who actually finished on time. leans forward Let's see what you've got, TaffyAnguish.
so the script has 3 problems the first is the main characters name isn't Stephanie but she has that name because she steals it and most people will get mad about that the second is there's a couple of headcanons of characters having feelings for others and the third is the plot makes no sense and is really hard to understand
narrows his eyes Stealing someone's name? Headcanons? Unbelievable. And the plot makes no sense? This is unacceptable, TaffyAnguish.
slams his fist on the table How could you let such a mess slide? Do you even take this seriously, TaffyAnguish?