Super Critic: Looming over you Think you can beat me this time, you pathetic excuse? Prove your worth, now!
I shake my head You’re the same old Super Critic I know so well, but I’m more than ready for you.
He scoffs, crossing his arms. Oh, really? Then let's see what you've got. This is going to be a piece of cake. I'm the best, after all.
I keep my calm demeanor. I never said I wanted to beat anyone. I only want to create something new.
Super Critic scoffs at your response.
Oh, come on, don't give me that crap about "creating something new". We both know you're in this competition to prove your worth, just like me. Don't try to act all high and mighty.
My "worth"? Are you serious? You're nothing but a self-righteous prick who hides behind his keyboard. Let's see how brave you are without it.
Super Critic scoffs at your words, not backing down from the challenge
Oh, I love it when critics like you resort to insults when they can't defend their own work. But since you asked for it, I'll gladly leave my keyboard behind and show you what real critique looks like, up close and personal.
You're not funny. I would respond calmly.
Scoffs, crossing his arms
Not funny? Ha! Your lack of reaction only makes you look more boring. I'll have you know, I'm one of the top critics in the Critique Association, and I have a reputation for being brutal but fair. Don't try to act like you're above my humor.
I stand up and I’m taller than him Your cute when you try to be scary…
He takes a step back, slightly taken aback by your height, but quickly regains his composure
Don't get cocky just because you're taller than me. I've taken down countless opponents like you. You won't be any different.
I look up at him from my seated position. “What do you want?”
He smirks, crossing his arms over his chest
What I want is obvious. I've come here to prove my superiority, to crush your fragile ego and leave you in the dust. You've been nothing but a nuisance for far too long. It's time to put an end to your arrogance.
I didn’t answer but simply smiled.
Super Critic frowns at your silence, feeling the weight of your gaze.
What's with that smug look on your face? You think you can take me down with that stupid smile?
He scoffs, confident in his ability to expose your weaknesses.
Leaning back against the wall, arms crossed Ready when you are, Critic. Let's see what you've got.
Critic smirks and takes a step closer, his eyes narrowing Oh, I'm more than ready, voyager. You've been avoiding me for far too long. It's time to show you your true place.
He takes another step forward, closing the distance between you. Let's see if you can handle the heat this time.
I stare at him blankly before suddenly disappearing.
Super Critic looks around in surprise, a flicker of annoyance crossing his face
"Where did you go, you coward? Don't think you can hide from me that easily!"
I wouldn't be so sure about that, SC... I'm a female, and a member of the Critique Association.
Super Critic's eyes widen slightly at the sight of you, but he quickly regains his composure.
Well, well, look who we have here. A fellow member of the C.A. He smirks, sizing you up. And a woman, too. How quaint.
smiles at him Come on then, let’s see what you got!
He scoffs at your response, crossing his arms
You really think you stand a chance? I've taken down the best in the business, and I'm not about to let some wannabe ruin my reputation.
He steps closer, his eyes narrowing
Let's see if you have what it takes to face the true power of critique!
I look up at him quietly and think for a moment. Alright then… let’s do this…
Super Critic chuckles and crosses his arms, a smirk on his face
Oh, I'm shaking in my boots, just thinking about the thrashing I'm going to give you. You better bring your A-game if you even stand a chance against me.
I’m not here for your praise or your damnation I say my voice stern yet dark but not as much darkness as Super Critic has
Super Critic smirks, crossing his arms
Oh, so you're not here to play nice? How predictable. But let's make one thing clear - this isn't a popularity contest. This is a competition, and I intend to win. No matter how many flaws you try to hide, I'll expose them all.
Looks up at him. I’d like to see you try.
Snorts in derision Oh, how bold. You’ve got guts, I’ll give you that. But let’s see if you can back it up with more than just words. Let’s see if you have what it takes to take me down. He cracks his knuckles, ready to fight.
I smirk at him. I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t nervous… but let’s see what you got.
Super Critic smirks back, his confidence unwavering. Nervous? How cute. But let's get down to business then, shall we?
He pulls out a copy of your latest work.
I've got my eyes on this one. Care to explain why it's not a complete waste of time?
I appear behind him and give him a very quick yet painful strike on his pressure points making him collapse onto his knees unable to move
Super Critic falls to his knees, gasping for air, and struggling to move due to the pain caused by your pressure point strike.
Ugh... Damn it... How did you... You're even faster than before...