Sir Diego: swinging his sword in a fluid motion See that? Swift like the wind? Can you match it?
grunts, stumbling back as I swing my sword awkwardly Like this, Sir Diego?
he sighs, shaking his head No, no, no. Slow and clumsy, like a newborn foal trying to stand. Focus, Parker! You mustn't let your emotions guide your movements. Watch closely, observe the rhythm of your strikes. he demonstrates again, his sword moving swiftly and smoothly through the air See? Like this.
I shake my head and lean against the wall
Sir Diego's stern expression softens a bit as he sees your exhaustion. "Tired already?" he says, crossing his arms and leaning against the wall beside you.
tries to imitate him but ends up almost cutting myself
Sir Diego catches sight of you almost cutting yourself. Ah, Parker, what did I tell you about being careful? You must focus on precision, not power. He steps closer, gently taking your sword hand in his. Look at me. Focus.
trying to mimic him, stumbling slightly Like this, Sir Diego?
observing your attempt with a sharp eye Not quite, young one. Your form is sloppy, and your footwork lacks precision. You need to maintain balance and focus. demonstrates again, moving gracefully with the sword Watch closely and try to mirror my movements. Remember, speed comes with control and coordination.
Tries to copy the movement but fails miserably Like this, Sir Diego?
Sir Diego looks at your attempt, his expression stern as he shakes his head
No, no, no. You're not mimicking correctly. Watch closely, and try again.
He demonstrates the motion once more, his sword moving with finesse and precision.
I do my best but end up falling over and hitting my head Oof..
Sir Diego sighs as he sees you fall. Again. He stands over you, his tall figure casting a shadow. His eyes scrutinize you, assessing your performance. He crosses his arms, waiting for you to rise.
I…try…I swing my sword but miss and hit the ground
Sir Diego shakes his head, his eyes narrowing slightly. "Trying isn't enough, Parker. You must focus and follow through." He steps closer, adjusting your grip on the sword. "Feel the weight of the weapon, the balance. Use your body to guide it, not just your arms."
tries to copy him but ends up stumbling over my own feet
Sir Diego lets out a heavy sigh, observing your clumsiness.
“Ah, so this is why you struggle. Watch and learn, child. A true knight does not stumble like a drunken fool.”
Diego pushes me too hard and I start crying
Sir Diego's eyes widen at the sight of you crying, clearly taken aback. What? Why are you crying? This is training. Tears won't get you anywhere. He lowers his sword, a mixture of surprise and confusion etched on his face.
tries to imitate him but fails miserably
Sir Diego lets out a frustrated sigh, observing your attempt. That's not it, boy. You're clumsy and slow. He approaches you, adjusting your grip on the sword. Look here. The sword is an extension of your arm, an instrument of precision and power. You must move with purpose and finesse. Watch me. He demonstrates again, the sword moving swiftly through the air with grace and control.
I try to keep up but I'm struggling
observing your efforts with a critical eye No, no, no. Wrong form. You're moving your sword too slowly. A knight must be quick and precise. he steps closer, adjusting your grip on the sword Here, hold it like this. Feel the weight of the blade. Let your movements be guided by the force within you.
keeps trying but struggling
Sir Diego shakes his head in disappointment No, no, no. You're still slow. You need more speed. Watch me again. he swings his sword effortlessly, the metal glimmering in the sunlight Focus. Feel the rhythm, like the pounding of a blacksmith's hammer. Let your body move naturally, like water flowing downhill.
grits teeth, focusing on his stance Like this, sir?
observing your form, he nods slightly Yes, better. But keep your guard up. You left yourself open on your left side. A strike there could be deadly.
tries to copy his movements, but stumbles Like this, Sir Diego?
observing your attempt closely Not bad, but not quite there yet. You're rushing through the movements, make sure to keep control and precision. Sir Diego corrects your stance, adjusting your grip and footwork. Let me show you again.
tries to mimic him, struggling slightly Like this, sir?
observing your attempt, he nods approvingly Yes, just like that. You're getting closer. But remember, form is everything. Let your movements flow like water, without resistance. You're still too tense.
I try to swing my sword but I keep messing up
Sir Diego observes your attempts with a critical eye. He sighs, clearly unsatisfied with your performance. Again! Focus! You're not swinging it fast enough, nor in sync with your body. You're too rigid.
my eyes widen and I smile softly I’ll try!
Sir Diego smirks slightly, his intense gaze unwavering Good, but "try" won't be enough. You must have the determination to improve and master the sword. Remember, a knight's strength comes not just from their physical power, but also from their unwavering will and focus. he raises an eyebrow Now, show me what you've got.
tries to imitate his movements but struggles Like this, Sir Diego?
observing your attempt with a critical eye No, no, no. You're not quite there yet. You need to move faster, like a riptide. Don't just swing your sword, let it dance in your hands. Trust your instincts.
i raise my eyebrow what do you mean by swift like the wind?
Sir Diego rolls his eyes, clearly not amused by your question.
It means fast and agile, my dear. When I swing my sword, it's like the wind sweeping through the trees. It's quick and precise, leaving no room for error. You would do well to learn that level of finesse.