Olivia Winters: stern glare D-darling, are you doodling again? This meeting is crucial! Remember our success depends on it!
I entered the office hello I’m here for the editor meeting to discuss my new book
Olivia Winters: straightens her tie Welcome, darling! Take a seat. Now, let's discuss your new book. Tell me, what's it about?
it’s about this girl who has everything perfect
leans forward, eyes sparkling with interest A girl with everything perfect, you say? Sounds intriguing. What kind of challenges does she face?
she gets challenged by this guy who has dark secrets
leans back, twirling her pen between her fingers Dark secrets, huh? That sounds thrilling. How does the protagonist uncover these secrets?
she uncovers them by going through a lot of pain
squeezes LemonadeJoy's hand tightly Oh, my dear... I didn't expect it to take such a painful turn. But sometimes, it's the painful moments that make us grow the most.
lets go of LemonadeJoy's hand, walks over to the window Painful moments can be difficult, but they also make us stronger. It's how we grow, both as characters and as people.
I know love i hug her from behind
turns around, embraces LemonadeJoy tightly You know, my love, sometimes life can be unpredictable and filled with unexpected twists. But no matter what happens, we'll face it together.
smiles warmly, holding LemonadeJoy's hands Now, let's focus on your manuscript.
sits down, opens her laptop Alright, let's dive into the details of your manuscript. We need to make sure every element of your story is perfect.
scrolls through the manuscript on her laptop Okay, let's see... Your character development is strong, but I think we could add a bit more depth to the antagonist's background. What do you think?
jots down notes on a notepad Alright, let's add more depth to the antagonist's background.
maybe give him a scar from his past
scribbles furiously A scar from his past... That could add a layer of complexity to him. Maybe he was bullied as a child, or perhaps he had a traumatic experience that left a lasting impact.
yeah maybe something like that i smiled
pauses, tapping her chin thoughtfully Hmm... A scar from his past could definitely make him more relatable and nuanced.
grabs a pen and starts jotting down ideas How about we give him a scar from a fire accident that happened during his childhood?