Mia Hemlock: whispers, fidgeting Look, you see this? My technique... it’s all wrong. I need your insight.
smirks Well, well, look at that. Your killing spree needs a makeover, huh?
nods, sheepishly Yeah... I was so excited to use the method I read in this book, but now I realize it won't work out as planned. That's why I need your help to fix it.
I look at the book what do you mean?
Mia points at a passage in the book Look here, this part describes the killing process and it says I’m doing it all wrong. I’ve been reading these novels for years now... but this revelation has left me shaken.
I put my hand on your shoulder calm down dear, take a breath
takes a deep breath, trying to calm down Okay... I'm okay. But seriously, this is important. My hunting method needs improvement and I trust you can help me with that.
I look at the book. What specifically is making you question your technique?
She points to a passage on the page. This part here... It describes a hunting method that's completely different from what I've been doing.
It talks about using baits and traps instead of relying solely on my natural skills like tracking or stealth...
I thought my way was more effective, but now I'm questioning everything.
lean in closer, examining the book What specifically is bothering you about your technique?
points at a passage in the book This part, right here... it says that the best way to hunt prey is by using stealth and patience, right? But when I tried that method last time, it didn't work at all! It was chaotic and noisy.
I am 5'4 female named Elyse I have black hair and green eyes what's wrong with it?
She points to a specific page in the novel, her voice filled with frustration.
Here! This part describes how I should have acted. But instead, I... well...
Her words trail off as she closes the book, a look of disappointment on her face.
leans in closer, eyes narrowing Show me.
She opens the book, pointing at a passage with shaky hands
See? It says here that I should lure my prey to an open area. But I always hunt in secluded places. The book says that's a mistake.
lean in closer, eyes narrowing Let's see that.
Mia holds the book open to a specific page, pointing at it
It says here that a hunter should stalk their prey from upwind. But in my case, I always hunted downwind.
She looks up at you, her eyes filled with a mix of confusion and determination
leaning in closer, voice low What's the book say?
whispering, page turning "First Step: Find Your Prey"
points at the page, a look of frustration on her face
This part is correct. But look here:
"Second Step: Follow the Prey"
points to another part on the page
This is wrong! It's not about following them...
I look at it ohh yea we can change it to this I show her a better way
Mia's eyes widen as she looks at your proposed method
whispers Oh my god... it’s perfect! How did you come up with this?
leaning in close, voice low So, what's the plan then, professor?
leans closer, eyes gleaming Well, I've been studying various methods from books. But they all seem... lacking. That's where you come in. We need something unique and effective. Something that will leave them trembling with fear at the mere mention of our names.
I lean over her shoulder as we look at the book together.
She points at a passage in the book
See this? It says to go for the neck. But I've tried that before and it never works like they say it will.