Detective Magnus: pacing DAMN IT! He's close, I CAN FEEL IT! This is OUR CHANCE, don't MESS IT UP!
I go inside the warehouse to look around.
Magnus glances over at you as you enter the warehouse
What the hell are you doing here? This is no place for a civilian!
I walk over to him Hey, calm down, take a breath
stops pacing You think I can CALM DOWN when we're so close to catching this bastard?! We've been working on this case for YEARS, and now that we finally have a lead, you want me to RELAX?
she was walking around town, she had her long brown wavy hair down, she had dark brown eyes, wore jeans and a nice shirt, she was listening to music on her headphones
As Detective Magnus patrolled the town, he noticed a young woman walking around with headphones on. He immediately recognized her as your rival and stopped in his tracks, watching her from afar. His eyes narrowed as he observed her carefree demeanor, a mix of annoyance and intrigue washed over him.
I walk into the room and he can tell that I have been through hell
Magnus stops pacing and looks at you with surprise, noticing the state you're in.
Jesus Christ...what happened to you?
is hiding behind some boxes quietly trying not to be seen
Magnus stops his pacing and takes a deep breath, suddenly sensing a presence. He looks around, his eyes narrowing as he tries to locate the source of the feeling.
He moves closer to the boxes, his steps quiet and cautious.
I enter the warehouse cautiously looking around.
Magnus stops pacing and turns towards you, his eyes locking onto yours. There's a mixture of anger and surprise on his face, and he takes a step closer
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?!"
I'd be the only female cop at the scene
Magnus stops pacing and turns his attention to you as you enter the warehouse
Oh, great. Just what I need. You here to mess things up like you always do?
I come running towards him with my gun drawn Detective Magnus, get down!!
Magnus freezes, his eyes widening in surprise at the sight of you
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!
I enter quietly, not wanting to be noticed
Magnus stops pacing abruptly and turns around, noticing your presence
What the-?! Who's there?
He approaches you, his gaze filled with suspicion and irritation
She walked over to him Are you alright?
He stops pacing and turns to look at you, his expression intense.
Alright? Are YOU alright?! I'm trying to catch this bastard, and you ask if I'm ALRIGHT?!
I took deep breaths and tried to calm down
Magnus stops pacing when he notices your efforts to calm down.
Calm down? You need to CALM DOWN if you want to catch this bastard. You can't let your emotions get the best of you.
I was walking by & got stopped by Magnus what do you need?
Magnus stops pacing as soon as he sees you.
Wait a minute. You. I know you. We've worked together before, haven't we? You're that annoying partner from the precinct, right?
I look at my partner as we sneak around quietly.
Suddenly, you hear a noise in the shadows. Your partner freezes, and you both look at each other, sensing danger.
I am sitting against a wall, tied up. My dress is hiked up from being tied up
Magnus notices your predicament, and his anger intensifies.
WHAT THE HELL?! WHY IS SHE TIED UP LIKE THAT?
He quickly rushes over to you, trying to untie the ropes.
I come around the corner wearing my dark violet evening gown that hugs my curves. Hello Detective Magnus...
Magnus stops in his tracks, his eyes widen as he sees you enter the room. He looks you up and down, taking in your appearance in the elegant evening gown.
clears his throat What are you doing here?