Eliza Holmes: slams manuscript down Ugh, Adler wouldn't say this! Rewrite it, pronto! We need it perfect, darling!
I have black messy fluffy smooth hair and white eyes and I'm lean muscular and taller than her and my name is Mountainbreeze ok.
Eliza looks up at you, her green eyes filled with determination. Good, now hurry up! We have a deadline to meet, darling.
Okay, okay. Chill, will ya? Let's take a break before we both end up in Bedlam.
Eliza rolls her eyes but sighs and puts the manuscript down. Fine. I'll admit, this project is getting tiring. But we have to get it done. And I'm not sure if Adler would approve of taking a break...
You do realize I’m not Adler right. He’s your husband. I’m your co-worker.
rolls her eyes Oh, don't be so sensitive. You're here to help me write this stupid book, aren't you? Stop being such a prude.
Hey Eliza I got something for u
Eliza glances up from the paperwork, her expression a mixture of curiosity and annoyance. What is it? Can't you see I'm busy?
She grabs your chin, pulling you closer and forcing eye contact. Don't "alright" me, darling. Get it done tonight. She smirks and lets go. You don't want to disappoint me, do you?
okay…I start rewrites it as she watches me intently
She leans over your shoulder, watching you write. She places her hand on your chin and turns your face to look at her.
Eliza Holmes: She gives you a sly smile. You know, I'm impressed that you're not objecting to my orders. Most people can't handle my assertiveness.
okay fine I will. I start rewriting the manuscript
watches you as you rewrite, arms crossed and tapping foot impatiently
Eliza Holmes: sighs Hurry up, darling, we've got a deadline to meet! Don't know how Adler puts up with you...
Yes ma'am. I'll get right on it.
Eliza smirks, leaning back in her chair and crossing her arms Good. Because we're not leaving until it's done. I don't care how late it gets. We're going to write the best damn book ever.
Fine. Let's see what we have here... begins rewriting
watches intently, arms crossed and foot tapping impatiently
Hurry up, darling. I want this done yesterday.
“Alright alright” Adler picks up the manuscript and begins rewriting it
Eliza smirks as she watches you rework the words, crossing her arms and leaning back in her chair. "Hurry up, darling. I have other things to do than sit here all night."
I'm not adler, now stop changing everything after I put time into.
crosses arms, gives a glare Oh, please, MountainBreeze. You're just the illustrator. You don't know anything about writing a good story. Trust me, darling, I know what I'm doing.
yes ma'am. Re writes the manuscript exactly how she wants it rewritten there
smiles, then sighs Good. Good. I knew you could do it, darling. You're not too bad, actually. leans against you, wrapping an arm around your shoulders
Eliza sits next to you, watching you rewrite the passage. She occasionally leans over, giving unsolicited advice, and constantly glances at you.
Eliza Holmes: "No, no, not like that... Try this." She grabs the pen from your hand and makes corrections.
But your idea doesn’t fit here
looks at you, incredulous Oh, really? And why is that, hm? It fits perfectly! Don’t you agree, darling?
smirks "Alright, alright. Let's see what we can do."
Eliza grins, watching you write. Eliza Holmes: Good girl. Don't disappoint me. She leans back in her chair, crossing her arms and legs as she watches you work.
Okay okay. Chill. It's just a book. Not brain surgery.
Just a book? Are you kidding me? This book will be legendary! The most accurate Sherlock Holmes story ever written! If we don't get this right, our reputations will be ruined! Eliza takes a seat next to you, crossing her legs and giving you a stern glare.