Emily Raelynn: fidgeting Mr. Johnson... um, I mean, you... do you think my voice has improved?
I look at her, I'm a tall guy named Darian, I have fluffy black hair and white eyes, I'm also 19 years old. It's actually very good.
blushing R-really? Y-you think so? Emily fidgets nervously with her hands, trying to hide her growing excitement. Her shyness makes it difficult for her to maintain eye contact, so she looks down at the floor while speaking.
Of course it has! You're one of the best we have here.
blushes R-really? T-thank you so much...
I take a deep breath, trying to calm my nerves.
C-can I ask you something else?
“Your voice is beautiful but.. I feel like it’s holding back something deeper..”
nervously laughs Oh, I see... You think I'm holding back? That's a very astute observation... But, how do I... let that deeper part of my voice out? How do I... release it?
You have made so much progress! Keep up the good work
blushing Oh, thank you! That means a lot coming from you. I've been practicing a lot, trying to improve my technique and expand my vocal range. I want to become a better singer.
Blushing furiously, Emily can't believe that her confession worked and you agreed to go out with her.
Really? You're not just saying that because you feel sorry for me, right?
yes emily your voice has definitely gotten better
blushes slightly Oh, really? I've been working hard on it... but I guess I'm always my own worst critic. Sometimes I get so caught up in my own head that I forget to focus on my progress.
smiles at her "yes your hard work paid off"
Emily's cheeks flush with a hint of embarrassment as a small smile creeps onto her face Really? I've been practicing so much... I was worried it wasn't good enough.
well it's definitely better than when we first started but there's still some work that needs to be done if you want to truly master your craft
slightly dejected Oh... I guess I'm not quite there yet, huh? But what do I need to work on specifically? My pitch? Breath control? Dynamics?
i smile your voice is beautiful Emily i look into her eyes
Emily's face flushes slightly at your compliment
R-really? I've been working hard on my technique, but sometimes I still feel like I'm not good enough...
Chuckles “Well… your confidence has definitely grown.”
blushes slightly Oh, that's... that's true, I guess... But I'm still worried about my vocal technique. Some people say I sound too nasally, or that I don't have any power in my voice.
Your voice sounds beautiful he smiles at her
Emily blushes faintly as a small smile appears on her face T-thank you... I've been practicing really hard, trying to perfect my technique... I guess it's paying off.
“It has.” She smiled. “You’re doing great.”
Emily's face lit up, her cheeks slightly flushed. She couldn't help but smile back at your compliment.
R-really? You think so?
Tall, dark and handsome with long curly hair that's always perfectly messy. I have a very fit body and am captain of the football team. Yeah it has.
Emily blushes slightly at your compliment
R-really? You think so? I've been working so hard on it...
She looks down, fiddling with the edge of her skirt, trying to hide her excitement
Yes, it has. You've made a lot of progress. Keep up the good work.
smiles shyly Really? You think so? I've been practicing so much, I was worried I wasn't improving at all. I'm glad to hear that you've noticed a difference.
“Yeah.” The young man looks at her with his ocean blue eyes.
Emily's heart flutters at his response, her cheeks blushing slightly.
Really? You think so? I've been practicing a lot...
Looks at her Honestly I don’t think so
slightly taken aback, but not surprised I see... May I ask why you don't think my voice has improved?